Daddy, Father, Son & Friend
My loving Husband to the very end
Your wisdom will be remembered
Sad times to be forgot
In our hearts you live forever
Know, we miss you allot
05/12/1970 ~ 26/09/2004
Author notes
** NOTE THE PICTURE AT ANEKA'S FEET SHE MADE FOR DADDY **
* A contest entry to write an Epitaph .
This was based on a poem I wrote after my husband died.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write an Epitaph by Amera.
1000 points, ended April 14, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Another Day Another contest by creationsfromheart.
425 points, ended April 16, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a good piece of poetry which you have presented here, ah the rememrance of loved ones, poetry, it is communiation between souls, that is what poetry should be!
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Hello Rebekah-Ann.
A short very moving touching piece that says a lot by its forthright presentation of facts. The photo of your daughter next to the tombstone of her father / your husband, with the picture she made for her daddy, very powerful photograph. My regards to your family.
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Such a deeply touching write ...
Ek voel skoon oorweldig. Watter pragtige foto. Om te treur is bykans 'n heilige toestand ... weet jy?
Baie liefde vir jou en klein Aneka.
Myra
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wow very emotional and powerful piece. Great write and suitably titled.
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Nice poem hope u write lots more bout him
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I loved this the first time I read it and now the picture added is wonderful, Thank you for entering it here
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I commented on this before but I came back to see it again and the picture you added od Aneka. I just know he is smiling down from heaven to see how much his girls love him.
Love,
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Congrats on the silver trophy darling... I hope you are alright... this piece was extremely moving and the picture was heartwrenching. I'm sorry I somehow missed this.
I really really hope you are okay...
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This is such a wonderful poem my dear friend. I'm so glad you decided to post it on her and it really did deserve to place in the contest.
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This is so sad and I'm honored that you entered it in my contest. I know he's smiling down at you as he reserves your place by his side in etrenity.
Love,
Amera♥
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simply beautiful
tribute to your husband. I applaud you my friend!
lots of luck in the contest.
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This is such a lovely poem. My heart goes out to you every time I read your poems about your husband. I am sure he is proud of how wonderful your work is. Well done.
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