Every classic eye shift; spins me shiftless.
Even his smile categorically ignites me.
Pity Pat.
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- Another prompt from me... by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 14, 2008, 14 entries
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ah the look in the eye, it can fire the spirit and spin it senseless, lol ah pity perhaps, maybe just dance
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yeah-just dance
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Thats really out there, loved the Pity Pat
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hahaha, I tend to be 'top-heavy' hahaha thanks
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