the chittering of rehydrating grasses as they blow
in the wind pushing invisibly above
where airplane engines drone by
and the humming of voices
issuing commands to
frolicking dogs
in spring
time
see my notes
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Sounds like farm dogs or dogs in a park, loverly atmosphere of this poem and that photo of the dog on your page is superb, it could be sold I bet to a pet magazine.


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it's been a while since i've read anything from you, and this is a great piece to change that trend!
great piece!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins


