Heaven highlights her
And she glows like an angel
In the sunlight
Barely seeing her beauty
In the high glare
I am left in awe
To me she was always
A beautiful personality
Some one I loved to talk to
My best out of all friends
Today was the first day
I saw beauty shining through
Never looked at her
Through these eyes before
But now I never want
To look at her any other way
My heart has fallen
Into her care
Just hope she never lets it go…
Written & Copyrighted April 13, 2008
By Jeff W. Baily
Author notes
I was really not feeling any inspiration to write in a few months it seems, prob not near that long though, but it's been a while. I was listening to some of my favorite artist's & just day dreaming when I came up with this mostly inspired by a beautiful artist I love most right now, but I dreamed up the person behind since I never really met her even. I wish I could write true love poems, but for that you need true love, since it doesn't exist in real life I now list these as fiction cause they are made up. A girl could live a happy ever after fairytale with me if she could only win my heart, with me you can have the fiction cause I live in that world, but so far no girl has come close since my first love.
Please tell me what you think, but be considerate
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forgot to give you the wee yellow chaps awesome
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oh jeff this was the most heart stopping poem i have ever read to write about someone in so much depth your words are truely spoken of someone who was in deep love this is your talent trust me every woman in the world would love someone they love to write them something like this its awesome truely a poem worth publishing a lovers poem you could melt iceicles of the coldest of hearts fantastic what a great read
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evelynxxoo
thank you
don't really know what else to say, but I appreciate your comments they mean a lot.
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This is beautiful ..and while describing the sentiments of the heart you are a great poet with your great immagery well done...
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