It’s like the flames of the fire.
It’s like the ancient logs burning in it.
It’s like the love I feel for you.
It’s what I never want to disappear.
It’s the sun completing it’s slow journey, from the East.
It’s the feeling I get when I see what an incredible artist God is.
It’s a leaf waiting to fall.
It’s a bush waiting to bud.
It’s everything and it’s more,
It’s everything you want it for.
It’s a moment second’s screaming vow,
It's the forever moment,
It's just right now.
A contest entry
- Just feeling around.. by Angelflower.
1000 points, ended April 15, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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amen...
God is an incredible artist...I say that often myself...
I love this vibe...the in the moment feel of this write is executed perfectly!
you are really growing as a writer beautiful...I am so impressed with you...
damn...it must be something in the red Alabama dirt? LOL
you are rocking AP with your pen...
Blessings! Tammy
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Huh... this was really interesting.. I really liked it actually.. Great write..
Jetleena
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