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Wrist Cutter

I can understand your thirsty need
The circuit wants to complete itself
A broken heart once, twice, thrice
An oasis nearby, want to drink some?
Hopeless help, wanting to put a smile
In your already blank face, your mask
Didn't see the spiked laughter in you
Trembling, your innocence takes me. Why?
I can find the answer in your wrists

But the story is being told again
This time, the angry juggler smiles
Putting the knife in the wrong hands
The loveless walks up the stairs
Blind, intendedly, the sour progress
Destiny is always unknown for that means
But the attack move is already done
Senseless moves, a checkmate to the core
Slash the wrists and drown in blood yourself

Test the patience, anger and feelings
Is the hose connected to your system?
Sucker, draining the tears of sense and smile
A warm heart, the rainbow shining after rain?
Where is your so dearest love decomposing?
Are you done leeching every drop of me?
Creep around, play, destroy and steal
For your sake I worked, for your selfish needs
And the brackets silenced every word from me

A believer, yes, without a doubt of your love
But the puzzle wasn't solved; a brain in need
Bloodsucker, lusting for more like a baby
Your friends, my fiends, can't they love you?
Your hormones need a revolution from the sore?
Weakling, I hope you enjoy my vitality
Heartless, undeserving the beauty you're given
Raw love you've received. Want to know how much?
You can find the answer in my wrists

Author notes

I don't know the picture that was used as a prompt.
Oh, love. You won't even pass by this place, but considering a 0.001%, you might read this and find out about the real you.

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Comments

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  • XxSuicidal-LovexX
    August 9, 2008

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    Depressingly beautiful write. Painful, dark imagery, perfect for my taste. Last few lines were great. All around great poem, best of luck


  • RX-Queen
    June 5, 2008

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    Excellent write, powerfull and well written, I especially liked the ending, well done thanx for entering and good luck!


  • skull8686
    June 5, 2008

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    Awesome

    This was an amazing poem with all of the words that you used it described so much. Thanks and goodluck


  • Candy Morphine
    May 24, 2008

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    this is amazing
    the imagery was beautiful and the metaphor wwere perfect!
    im in awe of this poem

    well done and all the best for the contest


  • emotina
    May 18, 2008
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    nice work


  • Sound of Madness
    April 14, 2008
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    This is amazing. Very good work.


  • PoetryXisXmyXshieldX
    April 14, 2008

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    great

    I love this its so full of emotion. and i can relate to this as i feel it kinda...in some way explains me...


  • Angelflower
    April 14, 2008

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    Wow.. this was so intense.. I loved how full of emotion this was.. I must say that what was in the Authors Notes kind of confused me.. But anyway.. The image that you created was painfully beautiful.. I loved it.. Best of luck to you...
    Jetleena

    • Kyo-N
      April 14, 2008
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      My Author Notes? Nothing relevant. Just some words to the girl who made me feel this.


      • Angelflower
        April 14, 2008
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        Ok..just wanted to kind of make sure, and stuff..sorry about that...

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