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Pray To Remember

So often we find proof
cause for faith that's real.

With time, truth becomes aloof
lost clouds  forgotten appeal.

Pray!

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Prompt: "A Reason to Believe"

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  • passionate-poet
    April 14, 2008

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    a very beautiful picture you did a great job writing your poem in relation to your prompt i loved the poem


  • dustookie2
    April 14, 2008

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    The hope of prayer of giving it up when the going gets tough or we get lost. You picture the mist and fog reflects life ... i see the rhyme trademark style and smile as i read
    'cause for faith that's real
    lost cloud forgotten appeal
    Pray
    so often we find proof
    with time, truth becomes aloof
    Pray!'
    whichever way i read this i still share it by giving it up in words. A reason to belive in .......what i do believe in who i give my complete trust.who makes me feel complete a whole being.
    AN inspirational piece for living life.thank you...good luck in this contest...


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Very inspirational and full of truth...when nothing seems right the best thing we can do is find faith in prayer...nicely done...
    thank you for entering!