You are the only light I see,
you inspire this fire inside of me;
I 'live' for you,
I'll 'die' for you, too!
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good piece that shows the love and devotion fo someone for a friend/love, to offer their own life if needed
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hahaha, I suppose it's a bit over the top...hahahalol
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Very heartfelt and touching...not many feel so strongly about another...nicely done...
thank you for sharing!
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Really? thanks:
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