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Should I believe?




  He drew me in
    submerging eyes
      in sweet longings
somwhere in blood pumping
    ~hearts~
 
Then,
water spilled..

  ...my reason to believe.




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    Truly a piece which you have created with a magic of the emotions..well done and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    Very creative and unique...a beautiful and lovely write...
    thank you for sharing...
    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    So cleverly creative and attention grabbing... x Best wishes to you in this contest. Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.