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Life's symphony


I heard it ~
playing deeply
beneath my soul

~ His music ~

And I can believe in a God who dances beside me...

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Prompt: "A Reason to Believe"

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  • jbbrandi
    April 14, 2008

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    This is amazing. It packs a punch in such few words.
    I applaud you for that! Amazing write you've got here!!!

  • A Poets Dream
    April 14, 2008
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    Simply beautiful and well thought out!




    Dream


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Very beautiful and creative...a heartfelt and lovely take on the prompt...
    thank you for sharing!