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Savage Insanity





  Savage insanity
  shatters
fragmenting the obvious
  into somewhat anatomical
    behaviour

  in sudeness to race solitude
    the explosion
  was minutely kryptonic
    as if acid from
    wrongly done experiment
  scars face,then spirit.

  Slowly, the wind blows
setting the sun into moon
  varied psychological moves
  all point to me...
          savage insanity
              shattered.







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Prompt-Kryptonic

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 14, 2008
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    beautifuk take on the prompt. you used words quite well.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Wow an intense piece, superbly penned. All the best in the contest with it