Little Sister Sue
went to rest in Hell
tormenting Godly Minister's
that now dwell in Hell
forever more.
Author notes
Hm it would be amazing to see who we would run into there lol...
For the sore looser that is upset do to me taking the Gold. It was no mistake, it was written like this on purpose! Go to the grave yard and read some of them, you will see they are not poetically correct also you are now blocked on my list, I really prefer sore looser not to enter my contest.
Amera I am sorry you as a judge had to deal with this, I hope once they get over there pouting they are decent enough to say they are sorry for being, petty.
A contest entry
- Write an Epitaph by Amera.
1000 points, ended April 14, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 11 of 11
-
isabelwk
This is great lol! What a hoot!
-
congrats on the gold trophy!
i dug around and found the epitaph site... i may write some myself!
hehehe
congrats!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
I tried to write the poem on the grave myself using the link provided. one was only allowed a certain amount of letters, made it hard to express oneself. I really liked your poem and congratulations on winning the gold!!
Becks
-
Congrats on the gold .. a highly original poem in conception and conviction...
-
This is perfect, not only did you do a good job on the epitaph; you read the judge. You know the kind of work I enjoy and that is double meanings, hidden metaphor and image beyond the short verse. The fact that you exposed hypocritical ministers is original and clever.
Love,
Amera♥
-
Little Sister Sue--
Whatever did you do
deserving such a fate
while you disintigrate!
LOL---Well Done and good luck in the contest!!
-
Lol I am choking here lololol Too funny and a nice twist!
-
lol...now there is a twist...may she rest in chaos
All the best!
-
That was probably one of the most bizarre... slightly disturbing things I've ever seen!
Awesome! I really liked it. You have such a creative mind! Good luck darlin!
-
hehe lmao thats just cool lmao good luck oh i meant cruel
-
Wow!
Oh my this is great. You're really bad when you are kicked out hell. best of luck in the contest.
Adding your comment:
1 - 11 of 11
