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Jon

Lost
I am lost
Don't know what to do
Uncertain
I just don't know
Be my friend
I will be crushed if you ignore me
It wasn't ment to happen like this
Im sorry
Not much experiance in this
As you deny and say WHATEVER
I guess I wanted to much
Can there be cake and happiness?
He was you best friend
Broken is what we left you
I lost your love in Las Vegas
Please forgive me
It was dumb
Im sorry

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  • Kimmehh
    July 30, 2008
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    damn se. that was deep


  • ckwriter69
    April 13, 2008

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    Hi enjoyed this write. I like the short sentences that are filled with a sadness and emotional sentiments. Good job, thanks for sharing your feelings. Keep writing.