So briefly bright
he burned with intense passion
for God and country
Love was his finest offering.
Alas, he was snuffed out
in the sands of Iraq,
his life for all,
a fallen hero.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis
A contest entry
- Write an Epitaph by Amera.
1000 points, ended April 14, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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heroes don't fall.. they rise above mortality... be proud
not everyone dies a hero's death.
congrats for your bronze..
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such a sad write and done with so well. Congratulations on the trophy an I really think a tribute to a solder is worth it every time!
Becks
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beautifully written congrats.
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This is so sad. The truth always hurts.
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Artist a wonderful memorial peice for a soldier.
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Excellent Job Good luck
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Very nice, good luck
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