In the night
To the day
When everything is gone
It could be a soul away from the lightness
In the sun we see
the fighting over lights
all our dreams and wishes
we should hold for safe keeping
fighting for what's right..
Calling into the night
the dreams
forgotten in the light
waiting for a star to rise
feel the isolation fleeting
Calling into the night
to be.. or not to be
fighting to be free
watching when you were leaving
when I was so behind
Calling into the night
Combat.. just makes me want to cry
I'll stay together till we die
Calling Into The Night
Our loss of every single light
all the ashes have been remade
as a perfect memory
Calling into the night
Even I will remain
As a silhouette of time
Hear the ringing echoes singing
Across the sweetest horizon
..Calling to the night..
Author notes
I recently changed my name to Butterlies, so my name is butterlies, not "Shadows - swodahS"
A contest entry
- Say Goodbye by xTomorrowx.
900 points, ended April 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sorry if certain people dont like reading more than 30 lines.. I kinda added a little bit more if that won't kill your eyes >.>;;
Comments
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I really like this, it was written greatly, I loved how it was written, beautiful, flows well, great write.
I just have to comment on the background, it's absolutely beautiful, I love it, but it was kind of hard to read...
A beautiful write otherwise though, thanks very much for entering and best of luck. -
Why do you have "boob" as your.. you know what forget it I won't even ask.
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