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Caught in an Abusive Relationship

In the depest demsne of my mind
I am aware of you ophidarian lies
But I still subscrive to your verisimilitude
And succumb to the axioms you provide

I am merely a fibril entangled in you schemes
Misused, mistreated, and abraded by youir handling
You have divested me of my being
And my innocence has evanesced in your care

Perhaps one day, when I've emancipated from you
I will be free of your cavalier abuse
Or rather, your memory will come back
And it will hunt me like the merciless dhole

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The words from freerice.com are: demesne, ophidarian, verisimilitude, succomb, axioms, fibril, abraded, divested, evanesced, emancipate, cavalier, and dhole. I have donated at least 3,000 grains of rice, and quite possibly a whole lot more (and will definately continue to do so). Thank you for having me in your contest, and it was a pleasure to be in it.

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  • Death of the Author
    June 1, 2008
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    You misspelled these words in the poem:

    deepest
    demesne
    your

    I'm sure they are just typos, which I am quite prone to as well

    Thank you for entering and donating, your vocabulary is evidently very good to be using such words in context. Good luck x