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Spring

Wow my love look at this
Look outside and see
No more cold?... No more white?...
I guess it's finally spring!!

See the little robin?
It sings so happily
Oh look and there's another
That's a sure sign that it's spring

Our luck has finally turned
No more of this depression thing
No more grumpy, low spirits
We've waited so long for spring

So throw on your t-shirt
Pack up a lunch
Rusty old bridge
In it's shadow we park
No more cold for a couple of months
Getting warmer as we speak

Oh how I do love spring!

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  • Chrissy03
    April 14, 2008
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    This poem is lovely


  • Flight of Dragons
    April 14, 2008
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    YAY

    We love warm weather, and this poem brings out warmth. Great job!!!


  • Candy6
    April 13, 2008
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    Very good write. This is free verse style. I love reading the free verse style poems, too.