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Calm Sailing

Fresh and lovely

feeling ocean winds

zephyr spoon drifts

mist.

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20 poets


10 words




Prompt ~ Spoon

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  • stavykm gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    How refreshing, calm sailing. What a fabulous write and so relaxing with gentle imagery. Just 10 words, that amazes me. Thank you for sharing with me your gift to write poetry.
    Your sis
    Kelle Marie


  • dustookie2
    April 14, 2008

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    the sound of wind through the sails and rigging singing calm seas full sails now that is one peaceful imageyou pen with ease as you connection with nature as we share in your words Good luck


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    I could feel the breeze on my cheek and the mist through my hair. Loved it.
    Soulful Woman


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Just so beautiful... x


  • HeavenScent4U
    April 13, 2008

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    ~nods~ nicely done dear although you might want to use a word other than spoon itself because it was the prompt best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

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