On sand dune
to ocean's tune
'neath moon we spoon.
In a list
A contest entry
- To prompt you once more by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 3 by Celticmoon.
800 points, ended May 27, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short, sweet and to the point. Your words create a cute little snippet of an image to sit within the mind, however it leaves the mind seeking much more. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.
Blessings
Bel
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If this is just a 'one liner' Id hate to see a three
But seriously though, grand, simple emotions is what really makes a poem into poetry
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Great one-liner--quite visual actually! Good luck in the contest!
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Such a cute little ditty... x
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