When I'm angry
When I'm mad
Ready to blow
You calm me down
You're my kryptonite
When I'm sad
When I'm drowning
Ready to throw the towel in
You bring me back to life
You're my kryptonite
When I'm scared
When I'm feeling lonely
Ready to explode
You hold me tight
Reminding me
You're my Kryptonite
Author notes
10-20 LINES
NO PW
PROMPT 1:
KRYPTONITE
In a list
A contest entry
- ENTER HERE, IF PROMPTING IS DESIRED by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 14, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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what a sweet poem with a great message. I like the kryptonite analogy. Congrats on the bronze
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Like the feeling and emotion put into this poem. I really enojyed this poem. thanks for entering. as always Molly
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Nicely done, with the prompt 'kryptonite' I half expected a superman write. A very pleasant surprise, this is a beautifully touching piece. Best wishes in the contest
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Well done and a creative twist on the prompt.
Best of luck in the contest.
- joanne -
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Wow.. this was really good. I really liked this.. It was really intense.. Great write hun.. Good luck!!
Jetleena
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