I'm drowning into you,
But I'm still breathing.
You're following me deeper,
We're rising and sinking.
Rising into the clouds,
Falling into love,
Wrap me into you,
Hold me closer,
Keep me dancing on your fingertips.
We don't need the ocean,
We'll make a land all ours.
You and me,
Exploring,
Laughing,
Breathing...
Author notes
Not great... not even good... just words spilled across a page.
Comments
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"not great..not even good..."
come on...give yourself a little more credit...
these are not just words they're your emotions...and I'll say they flow quite well!
a very nice piece
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Beautiful poem - i loved the starting lines, just loved them - im drowning into you, but im still breathing.. Conclusion was done well too, its so good to read something by you again cousin! its been a long time.. Keep writing
Love,
~ Lonely
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