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Anatomical me.

Missing image

The soul wanders

in my dreams

takes a journey

the eye can't see.

""""

mirrored reflections of a

time since gone

when once there was laughter

in the air is now strewn.

""""

Get out you Bastards!

leave this mind

scretching demons

intentions maligned.

""""

This skeleton structure

anatomical me

wants to view that mirror

and sanity see.

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For contest prompt.

http://decrepitude.deviantart.com/art/Sleep-In-Sanity-6884862

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  • Sagerider gold member
    May 19

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    Your poem was as spooky as the picture

    I think some of those live under my bed. A great description of a nightmare or childhood in the bad times.
    It's great but makes me sad.

  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    April 26

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    WOW!!!

    Yes! Fine penning of a most blatent horror-shop of the subject's wretched mind. Point blank riveting!! And I love the first stanza - it's far more creative than I could have ever done with the image of human suffering in a darkened abyss. Best of luck in this contest - I'm thrilled to see you're a finalist with this uniquely original and innovative poetic work!!! Keep on keeping on. Peace & love, Cyn


  • Lexie - gold member
    April 14

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    WOOOOOHOOOOO
    Im glad to see you here!! this is wonderfully done
    couldnt have put it better myself
    i think this is where i would have taken the prompt too, very well done indeed


  • Celticpoet gold member
    April 14
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    Excellent!

    Short...Powerful...yet packs a Punch! This is quite a write Dolores...well done...love Dan xxxx


  • Sagerider gold member
    April 14
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    Spooky

    Very well written but it looks like a recipe for nightmares. It gives me the chills.


  • Sgt B silver member
    April 13
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    Ewwwwww Scary!

    This one fits the picture well. Great job giving the willies

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