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Clickety Clack

he caterwauled
too out of tune
beneath a neon spoon

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  • Tam
    April 15, 2008

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    LOL

    you do these short writes so well...LOL!
    love caterwauled...
    you are so crazy Tim!
    xoxoxo


  • cheaphotelsign
    April 13, 2008

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    makes me think of a slightly untalented busker outside a greasy spoon. a fantastic little joint rolled up in words.lol


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    This is definitely thought provoking... x