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By the Spoon

Missing image

Sugar coated lies,
      feed me;

 

Curing my need,

    for soup.

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prompt:spoon
pic credit:http://www.comicsbulletin.com/busted/images/060227/coughsyrup.jpg

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Very clever. Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    April 13, 2008

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    random! I love the abstract imagery here! Wonderfully penned! uh..u shoudnt have mentioned soup though! I am hungry

    congrats!!
    pri


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Totally creative... x