Feeling the breeze
Wind picks up
So does the skirt...
Author notes
10 words
Prompt ~ Skirt
A contest entry
- To prompt you again by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be gentle!!
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I love the picture
She is an icon. She represents the sex kitten of the 60's. A goddess incarnate, the unobtainable to the average male. This picture became immortalized for a 'moment caught in time.' How do you represent that in 10 words? Quite a challenge! With Lavender Butterfly don't say what you see. Go outside the box, into the mirror and reach for the universal truth. She is a hard judge to score on in short verse. Look not at the picture, but beyond the picture. I look forward to your progress in short verse. It teaches the economy of words
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Clever combination with your choice of photo.
Marlene -
This is nicely done. And if not noticed by everyone, it is a great metaphor as well! You took the prompt and you ran with it nicely. Sometimes when the wind, or intensity picks up, so does the skirt lol. Great job with using the Marilyn pic as well
*but her last name is spelt Monroe
...just being nit-picky lol
Good luck in the contest sis!
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Yeah yeah yeah.. It was like almost four in the morning.. Leave me alone you big bully
LOL...
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Truly clever!
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ahhhhhhhh!!! lol
this is great
soemthing like i wrote lol
haha wonderfully wrote and good luck
stephaie =)
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hehe this is cute.... good luck in contest I dont think im getting these or something i dont know.. maybe its just me i dont know lol... but i think this is cute and good...
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