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Wind's Retaliation

Flowing free
upon a beauty;

 

Winds reveal
God's true,
               gift.

 


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prompt: skirt

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Oh, the thing about skirts and wind. Nicely done.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    April 13, 2008

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    WOW! So peaceful and wonderful this write is...ur usual style of seperating the last word is creative! It gives more impact! congrats on the hm..

    pri


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    How precious... x


  • sheltered
    April 13, 2008
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    from far i'd admire
    such angelic attire