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Holding you tightly,
Spooned into my body,
Together as one.

A contest entry

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  • carole21
    April 22, 2008

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    nice

    nice sensitive write for the prompt . . liked "Spooned into my body" and "Together as one" . . good job


    • buffsab99
      April 22, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your comments. The short poem contests are sometimes the hardest


  • Angelflower
    April 15, 2008

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    Aww. this was so beautiful.. To small but it was so sweet. and loving.. I really liked this..
    Jetleena


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Truly sincere and loving... x