It sat waiting
Glaring at the fork
Envying its teeth.
A contest entry
- To prompt you once more by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 13, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 176 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I really like this poem. It is very well written. I like the humor that you used in writing it.
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There is no spoon!
Man, you really are on it. I have to say I'm falling a bit in love with your stuff, you write both pretty life-lived profound stuff but also capable of writing some humerous and simple material which, I have to say, I appriaciate the most. I hope you explore more of these short poety because I think, from looking over your stuff, it's your best. Trust me, you can work your ass of all night on legendary metaphores on cosmic scales but more often that not a short little 3-liner says more to you and the reader than any heart-twister. Hope to read more from you soon dudette....
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that was really cute. and it made me giggle. :-)
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Wonderful!
Marlene -
Heh...I like this one. Interesting to see a spoon's point of view.
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So clever!... x
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