It fluttered in the wind
Like a white flame dying.
A contest entry
- To prompt you again by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 13, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank tou for entering my short poems contest. It is a very interest simile that you used in this poem. Well Done.
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Outstanding image you have created.
Marlene -
Beautiful poem, and great take on the prompt. Congratulations on the silver.
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Totally creative.... x
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awwww this is a great look at it
wonderfully done and good luck
take care
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