The red tears of love
fall from the heavens
My sorrows bleed all around me
Lost in the world's din
my cries go unheard
Anguish a mere shadow unseen
I now have lost you
there is no regret
But life's so lonely without you
One day once again
I'll feel your embrace
Till then may tears fall from heaven
Author notes
Option #1
http://princess-of-shadows.deviantart.com/art/we-are-two-no-more-just-one-51753429
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest by Nighttime angel.
1245 points, ended April 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I dont see many of this type of write from you, however, I think that its a loss that I dont. This is amazing. Great job. It fits the image well, and should be a winner in any contest.
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this is a beautifully sad poem. nice job and hope to see you write mor
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this is a very good poem that you have written. I really liked reading it. you did a great job with the prompt.
good luck & thank you for entering.
kat
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a nice, sad love poem, very good
I now have lost you
there is no regret
But life so lonely without you
the last line there ^ seems a little odd to me
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