In the sweet spring sun affair
I run my hand through the crip blue Air
Okay shoot
A contest entry
- 100 Places/ 100 Titles by Midnight-x-Rose.
450 points, ended April 15, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I think this is good if it means that someone who had been committing adultery is going to be shot be the wronged one, or maybe that nothing good lasts, so go ahead, do it. I have to admit I wasn't quite sure, but I thought it was good if my interpretation is right.
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I love this, its so cute!
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Oopsy... entered in wrong contest, sorry!
Your title is: Babe, I've Broken Before!
Best of luck. x -
Hakuna Matata, it means 'no worries' - Lion King I.
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