Through hell and the boundaries of heaven.
If you go to the depths of the ocean,
Or the heights of the ozone,
I'll be there to protect you till my last breath.
I shall not complain when I am weakened by your beauty,
This great pain calls me from within myself,
Like a leech sucking the life out of my chest
Let me float on in my head, and let it out,
The bell has rang and the time has come.
The fallen angel sings in my sleep,
Like the rain, your always in my dreams
Your in my thoughts, throughout the day
I cant stop thinking of you,
The image is burned.
This photograph of me and you,
Has long been watched over, by tired eyes
In the place where the tin-man sits
He is forever broken, his heart never ticks
With his axe he stands waiting in rust.
You try so hard, but somehow fail,
Just lean back, I'll break your fall,
Feel me im right here with you,
Anytime you need an escape,
Take me with you, I need you.
Author notes
ok, well, i was missing my best friend colie, and well we love each other, but we are too afraid to have anything more than a friendship, i went to disneyworld for a week this past week, and on the 5th day i wrote this poem about her in the shower, lol my family asked a lot of questions like why did i take a 40 minute long shower haha! but thats another story, the truth is, i feel like the tinman sometimes, so in my poem when i am refering to the tinman, its actually how i feel, i checked over my poem, but plz dont knock it off for mistakes, im not perfect, an as u can tell my notes even need work, plz tell me what you think....i love feedback so...plz comment, and im open to critisizm (sorry my notes suck, but im actually in a hurry)
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- Love Poetry Please by FallingTwilight.
390 points, ended April 16, 2008, 40 entries
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