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Whole

If something is
Tattered and torn and
Frayed on the edges
And used and warmed and
Ripped and shredded...

Is it broken?
Can it still work?

Should I fix it?

Author notes

I might've posted this before...I found it written down somewhere when I was cleaning out a room.

Couldn't think of a title. Sorry ^^"

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  • riasme
    April 14, 2008

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    yeah, it does seem a little bit familiar (keep wanting to spell it "farmiliar" like "surprise" etc) but I don't thinnk you've ever posted it before. this is really good!!! nice job

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    I don't remember seeing this before, but good write.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


  • liduen
    April 13, 2008

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    It sounds vaugly familar - but I'm proabaly just imagining that. Great, thought provoking write. Great job John Adams