Somebody like him,
guys like this only come around
once in a blue moon.
I'd say that he's the one.
The one who won over my heart,
from his sweetness and tenderness.
And from his understanding
of my ways and words.
He's the one
who's always be my side,
through thick and thin.
And said he'd always be there.
He's the one who won my heart,
and who i love ever so much..
A contest entry
- Tell Me What You ... by sassykitty.
390 points, ended June 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Sweet!
Sorry to sound cliched, but this is really sweet! I do like and can relate to the sentiments you so clearly express in this. This person is obviously very special and I know exactly how you feel, written lots along the same myself. I like the flow and structure of the stanzas and the sentiment works well. Thanks for sharing, but please check the AN requirements. cheers -
good poem.many feel like this and many can relate.heck my poems out! x
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