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The pain of it all

As I stand here in pain from
the way you have torn me to shreds,
I continue to rip myself apart.
I find that once I've been hurt,
it happens over and over again. For what?
Love? How selfish, everything seems
to be about love, always not
to close, not to fast, & my way.

I see the gaps now in our love,
they are just as plain as holes
on my face. So I stand here in anguish
causing myself more torment than I need.
All in the name of love

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  • infectedxheart
    November 14, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL!
    your words are so deep,
    loved it!


  • Wind 03
    October 29, 2008

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    so sad!

    deep and sad!it touched me and made me feel so sad to see such love wasted.many do so much in the name of love.i loved the last line amazing job!

    juliet


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 5, 2008
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    Wow

    How sad, and i've been there before, this is beautiful. I love it.

  • Nighttime angel
    April 15, 2008
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    wow this a very deep poem that you have written here. excellent job with this. a feeling that I have known.. all too well. I am sure there are many that can relate to this feeling. love isn't ever easy. sometimes its downright not fair. we always have a tendency to be really hard on ourselves no matter what.

    good luck

    kat