Right through the nights as I watch you
all alone and safe from afar
There is no moment to fear
Because everything in the darkness
becomes brighter…
Like the stars…
Like the moon…
Mysterious and beautiful as you are
Compassionate and unconditional,
encouraging my ways
Showing how to survive in a harsh world
Taking me to a level so high with your sounds
as they keep echoing in my head…
Believe me…
Trust me…
So right through my days,
surrounded by darkness so close,
every moment my faith grows stronger
Nothing in life can bring me down
and the reason…
YOU!!!
Author notes
Just showing some love...
A contest entry
- Wanted: Come Inside To See by JeannieD Hunter.
2000 points, ended April 16, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sometimes it just feels so right......
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Intense!! Very you dear friend~
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The wolf holds many thoughts and wisdom for us all...he is the keeper of the night and love he weaves for family...excellent write my sweet sister
congrats on the trophy
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Well
The words of a poet in love can be a condition that lingers and warms the heart. Such envy I do have when one can write of such things. I do not expect a read back. lol
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Thank You!
Your poem brings me to a place I don't want to leave. -
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Great...just stay here than if you like
I would love some company
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If it is based on a real feeling, great, and lucky you! If not, ignore that and...poor you.
It appears to be a distant watch (see lines one and two) so hopefully that is not an issue. The poem offers and accepts comfort and I guess that is how friendships of any level should be.
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It's real and I know I am lucky
Thnxs for always dropping in
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beautiful
This is a tender poem expressing how good your love makes you feel, believing in yourself, and showing you the way out of the darkness.
Congrats on the HM. It was well deserved.
Love & Hugs,
Jeannette
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A beautiful poem here Jeannette, loved every word and your description of love.
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WOW!! This is so beautiful. Fantastic take on this picture. Very impressively done. You just took the image to an even higher level. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Oh wow. I'll glance over my shoulder searching for your interest followng me when ever a warm breeze touch my skin. --- Thank you.
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Hey
where have you bin hiding
Missed your comments...missed you
It's so good to see you back here
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This is beautifully written! I love how you penned this...
This is wonderful! Great write, and keep penning
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awww yay LOVE!!!!
beautiful write twinsy
so happy
Tasha
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