Bemused eroding lives
lay concealed within flaccid shrouds
falling before fate
when shoved toward the abyss
Unless they jump their faith
Into the treasure grove
Author notes
Option #1
25 words max
http://decrepitude.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Is-The-Season-II-29410626
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE!! by Nighttime angel.
1075 points, ended April 16, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
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Comments
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great take on the prompt. I love your poem.
good luck in the contest
kat

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Good write enjoyed it.



