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epitaph

1904 - 2008


Emett Jester
Here lies a brave son
He should have held his tongue
The good die young

 

 

 

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  • jo-el
    April 14, 2008

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    funny...took me a few seconds to catch on lol. i'm slow at times. nice


  • Desire gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!


    Now...I had to chuckle hardddddddddd
    Brilliant this is
    I Love epitaph poetry

    Loved this!!
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Ithica silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Short and sweet... !!! One's demise is complete... *wink*


  • Ithica silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Short and sweet... !!! One's demise is complete... *wink*


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Congrats on the Gold babes-well deserved.
    xxx Hilly


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    this is something to think about... If he is 104 how old is his father? Goodness!

    Very well done!

    Congrats on the gold my friend!


  • StarEyes
    April 14, 2008

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    Oh my! Only the good die young And he was 104..... You had me doing math before my this morning, and that is not wise What a great job you did on this one!!

    Cograts on the well deserved Gold!!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Well done

    Brilliant simplicity


  • Cup-a-Joe
    April 13, 2008
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    Congrad's on the gold. Im to mean to die young.lol
    Joe


  • WomanWriting
    April 13, 2008
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    When I die
    I hope I see
    Humor's face
    in front of me.


    WW


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    haha lol Great job congratulations on winning the gold


  • PerVirtuous
    April 13, 2008

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    Ha ha ha ha ha! Fantasstic!!! My uncle Roland used to say people lived in direct preportion to their orneryness. He used to say that meant my aunt was immortal. You slipped this by many people I think. A brilliant take. Three bravo bunnies!


  • myrataal silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    You are too clever ...

    for words! Hahahahahaha

    For this can be interpreted in at least two obvious ways ... with versions, too.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Excellent

    I have picked my own epitaph of course

    1958-2067
    Here lies Jeff
    Who was doing fine
    Shot by irate husband
    Aged just 109


  • Faeryn
    April 13, 2008

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    Very clever! I like it. so...104 is young, eh? lol. Awesome epitaph! best of luck in the contest.
    Love,
    Tay


  • And Hyetal
    April 13, 2008
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    He was 104 years old... um...

    I seriously don't get it, I'm sorry. I'm a blonde.

    Cute epitaph, though!



    ~Cassie


    • Amera gold member
      April 13, 2008
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      Silly! It says the GOOD die young.

      • And Hyetal
        April 13, 2008

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        OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

        The bad are supposed to die old, and this guy died old, so that means...

        I get it now.


  • creationsfromheart
    April 13, 2008
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    Hh this is very good, I like this a lot! it is simple to the point very cleaver! Love this one!

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