creamy and steamy hot
like the yogurt i love
ice cream vanilla with a huge drop of chocolate fudge
the color white looks tacky compared to vanilla
it tastes so buttery-melt in my mouth
my guy's words is dripping with delicious words
makes me want to gobble them up with the birds in the air
cool and clear
sensually delightful in every bite
as i dream of pure vanilla candy
A contest entry
- Free Verse or Prose Prewrites Only by Randomly Beautiful.
600 points, ended April 17, 2008, 11 entries
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please tell me what you think and do you like it?
Comments
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I like the comparison of white to vanilla. It works well.
"my guy's words is dripping with delicious words"
You might want to take a look at that line... -
great poem thanks for sharing such thoughts
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Great poem a lot of depth. Good luck in the contest
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ooo... mmm... Sweeeeet! Is this suppose to be sensual.. Because I seemed to read it that way... Anywho... I really think this is... really mouth watering...
Thanks for the tasty read!
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