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Grandmother's Love

 

 

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Sitting on Grandmother's knee

Just my dolly and me

I feel so special everyday

When she cuddles us this way

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Grandmother's Love

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  • Andiness
    December 22, 2008
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    awww....this is sooo beautiful and sooo sweet. I love the colors on it. ITs just touching and beautiful. NOw I can do backgrounds like no one would believe, why can't I design beautiful tags just like this, huh??

    ---Thousand Petals

    Marry Christmas and Happy New Year!!


  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    A beautiful write and presentation. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Very sweet poem, Cheeky!

  • wit1016
    April 14, 2008

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    What a sweet poem. I'm a grandmother of nine myself and know that special feeling of holding a grandchild.
    Cherish them. Great poem.


  • Perception
    April 13, 2008

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    Aw... this is beautiful.. Sweet little poem.
    Wonderful!

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Lovely, simple border and background. Jeannie is right.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Yes!!! I like this alot. The border bot is perfectly done and the background color is exactly right! Very impressive work on this. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Corvus Corone
    April 13, 2008

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    This beautiful My angel.

    Reminds me of a young Jem and her nana.

    Nice work

    YLD

    xxxJemxxx

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