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Untouchable

You’re the only reason I’m still here,
Breathing in these breaths of knives, cutting into my skin,
It feels so good, it hurts so bad,
This is what love is.

I take a hit for us both every damn time,
And I know you know who I am,
I can see you too,
Don’t think that just because I fall I don’t love you,
You’re the only thing in that black tunnel other than myself and that little bead of light,
Hanging on, together, you and me,
But that hole in the ground is getting larger and I’m barely two feet off the ground…

Tell me it’s all for something,
Something greater and worth-while,
Something like your smile and those sweet words,
But nothing is sweeter than your touch,
Cold hands, cold words, cutting into my skin like these breaths.
It feels so good, it hurts so bad,
When you know you have it all right in the palm of your hands…

I’m untouchable.

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  • lilpooper
    October 30, 2008
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    is this what your entering?
    its good. substitue damn though.


  • penman gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you for sharing.

  • itsmekyo
    April 22, 2008

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    amazing

    i realy love this poem.
    its amazing. my favorite part is the last paragraph or stanza thing.whatever you want to call it. i think its amazing and i can really understand what you are saying.