Silver - Final Words - BGMA

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Silver - Final Words - BGMA
Dear Loved Ones
don't weep for me,
weep for you.
You are within Heaven's shadow,
I am within Heaven's light.
My dreams have come true.

pruedence
April 15
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Dreams of Heaven call to us all...this has a dreamy feel to it. I see clouds and one floating upon them with a shining light showing the world happiness from the Heavens. Well done, thanks for sharing
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penman gold member
April 15
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Wonderful
A great creation for the contest. Congratulations on the silver.

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moonbumps silver member
April 14
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Congrats on the super Silver babes-keep pushing that pen!!!
Hilly xxx
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B-Tha-1DA
April 13
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This is pretty deep stuff you got here. Love the entire poem I can I see why it took silver. Congrats!

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crimsondew silver member
April 13
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What touching words dear....
Congrats on the trophy...though it sounds strange to congratulate someone for their final words..sends a shiver down my spine hearing that from a dear friend....

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rossfsamuel
April 13
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No one gains Heaven except through Him.
I can tell your faith is very strong.
Well done;simplistic,pure and direct.

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daviscth silver member
April 13
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I really like this Cara. Your words are very beautifully done.

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Antares
April 13
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Beautiful !

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imahealer silver member
April 13
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Cara, this is so pretty. Losing you would not be funny at all. I thought we were supposed to write a funny one. I guess you are just to sweet to joke about dying. Best wishes, hun.

Shana

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creationsfromheart gold member
April 13
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Cara this is so pretty and so true. Lovely!

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paulcreates
April 13
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Hey good one!! They're the ones that have gone on (if they're Christian). It's true!
Paul

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A contest entry

Daily Contest by creationsfromheart. 400 points, ended April 13, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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