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Epitaph

Here lies ex-boyfriend.
Once friend - then foe.
No longer here,
So as you may have guessed,
His ex is now ready to CHEER!

WOOPIE!!!!!

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This is horrible... I can't believe I wrote this... but I just saw my ex, and I had to get it out somehow... maybe this has helped me in someway... who knows.

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  • creationsfromheart
    April 15, 2008

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    Sorry, I am looking for more serrious writes this time, even though I loved this one in the other contest gave me a good laugh, you are welcome to try and enter another real life like one with love.


    • brightXdarkness
      April 15, 2008
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      hahaha I get it

      thanks, I'll try to write another one then. When does this contest close?


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    HEHE well Good for you. Get the frustrations out. Good luck with this in the contest

  • abyssal
    April 14, 2008
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    Hope it has helped you, it certainly is good for a laugh.


  • ModernXTimes
    April 14, 2008

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    Are you truly ready to cheer yet? Hopefully you will be soon. And then we can really celebrate!

    This was really cute. Very light-hearted, short, sweet, and to the point (hey, like you! haha) Especially loved that lovely and poetic "woopie" at the end But shouldn't it be "here LIES ex-boyfriend?" Just a technical suggestion.

    Anyways, keep up the great work girlie! talk to you later!

    ~Carli~


  • creationsfromheart
    April 13, 2008
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    LOL hahah thanks for the laughter and good luck lmao! too funny hehehe

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