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Crow Flies

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As the crow flies
they carry me
up and away
clouds above
hides me from
misery as
I float on wings…

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  • Perception
    April 13, 2008

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    This is so simple yet... It holds a brilliant image (and not just from the picture)...
    "clouds above
    hides me from
    misery as
    I float on wings…"

    Those are just brilliant... wonderful... really... I love your imagery

  • Nighttime angel
    April 13, 2008

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    WOW. I love this poem so much. I wish that the crows would carry me away especially today. I want to float on wings too. this is a sad yet beautiful poem. I love your take on the prompt.

    good luck & thank you for entering.

    kat