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Thousand Eyes

I am haunted by a thousand eyes
I've seen brilliant blue lights
turn to darkness at my deeds,
I've seen gorgeous greens
turn to anguish at my acts,
The thousand eyes pursue me.

I am haunted by a thousand eyes,
Seen a lover's eyes light
with the bitterness of betrayal
Seen good friends eyes fill
with terror at my tales,
The thousand eyes see through me.

I am haunted by a thousand eyes
And now I look at her angel face.
See her embrace my illusion,
And now I look into her eyes
And feel her innocence improve me,
Can those two eyes renew me?
 

Author notes

Yeah, kinda bad. It has been a while since I last wrote. This is about how I feel with the girl I am going out with right now. It is the first relationship with somebody as sweet as she is that I have been in, and I'm typically an (forgive the profanity, it is the most apt term) asshole, so this is what I think. I don't like it technically too much, but meh, it is decent.

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  • Perception
    April 13, 2008
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    Aw. This isn't that bad. I like the unique Idea of a thousand eyes... It really gives an interesting image of all those eyes... piercing eyes...

    I really can't find anything bad about it - I actually think this is quite well written

    Thanks for the interesting read