Some where in the middle she realized that there was no love between them, she knew what was in her heart but she doesn't understand his coldness, and unloving manner. He at one time was the joy of her life, she loved him so. How could love just slip away if it was really love?
Life is so good
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Your poem addresses a very good question "if it was really love." In he bible it says love is patient and kind. We live in a very impatient world. Being kind is questionable. I ask along with you, "Where did the love go?" A very good poem you have written. Pen on.
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prefect understanding
Though short there is still a lot in this one. I seem to find myself asking many of the same questions and wondering the same things. So it is wonderfully expressive and very heart felt. Image amd visions.
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Image and visions
Thank you for understaning! this was short I know, I like to make a point right to the point as when I drag it out wow it becomes a short story! Ive been a struggling poet for years, and all of my poetry mostly are my emotions trying to understand or they are a way of letting out my confused feelings.... Thank you for reading and taking the time t comment it means so much to me... Vickie
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Such an important question that many are asking right now. Very good insight.
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goalsv
Thank you for your comment, and yes many are asking the same question... so sad.
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