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Time { HM }

Missing image

Ending's near,

I feel the chill,

Silent ripples reflecting,

Age,

I sit here, pondering,

Deep in thought,

Turning season's upon my body clock,

Ebb's away...





 

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Option 1 ) http://decrepitude.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Is-The-Season-II-29410626

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  • Ithica silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    I'm am realizing too that the blush is off the rose... contemplating what this all means, and how it all feels... Honestly it hasn't bee ALL good! But at least I'm working on it? hehe! Fabulous ( as bella would say...)


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 14, 2008

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    Loneliness comes through this piece. There is a certain peace to this too. Contemplation, of things that have gone before. Beautiful imagery within this work too. This is somewhat 'cold'. It chills me reading it. I can feel the silence. It is beautifully-written though.

    Love
    Wayne Leon

    xx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    I love this unique take on that picture!! Sad and lonely... yet beautifully written hun!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    What a beautiful picture sis and your words go so well with it. Loved the imagery, it's great. Good luck with this.

  • Nighttime angel
    April 13, 2008

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    WOW this is a very deep & thought provoking poem. I truly love this one. you did this picture justice. excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck & thank you for entering

    kat

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