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Trapped

A world cut in two,
By beauty and pain.
With no were to go,
You're worlds insane.
Silently trapped inside,
Between love and hate.

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I have to give credit to Genna because she helped me spark some ideas. =] Thanks.



Option #1
http://decrepitude.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Is-The-Season-II-29410626

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  • Nighttime angel
    April 15, 2008

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    well you did a great job on this. Genna is a great girl.
    I love the rhyme scheme and it flowed quite nicely.

    good luck

    kat