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Looking

It was there briefly,
smiled as it soared.
Had not a face,
yet the smile could bee seen.

Gone now, the traveller,
looked, felt joy,
continued.

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'Australian War Memorial' by Poetic Whisperer

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Aww.. I like that the traveller smile upon things and felt joy!
    Very uplifting!


  • catz Moderators member
    April 13, 2008

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    What a cool piece I guess I never thought of it quite in that light, but you're right... we see and move on. A good write and I wish you luck in the contest

    Dee

  • BigSpiral
    April 13, 2008

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    Quirky

    This paints a nice image for me. One of those quirky moments that happens and is over all at once. Sometimes those moments are the most memorable. Thanks for the journey