As I fall gently to sleep
Thoughts don't end there
Sleep ends nothing
My thoughts can't fall away from her
In my dream
I am no longer alone
She is there with me
Looking at me
With those beautiful pools of brown and green
Glistening with hope of the future
She and I take one giant step toward each other
I put my arms around her
And she slipped her arms around me
I see her eyes close
She pulls me closer to her
I feel her warm lips press against mine
We hold closer to each other
Her beautiful heart opening to me
I feel her breathing gently
She pulls me closer and......
There is suddenly loud music playing
A song I don't recognize
Everything gets darker
I open my eyes again
She disapears
I am alone once more
I sit up in bed
A single tear drips from my eyes
And I rise and begin my daydreaming of her
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Author notes
Option 5.) 'Kissing a crush, but it's only a dream...' This has happened to me for several nights now. Write how you would feel from your point of view.
Just to clarify to the person who this is about, don't worry about me. I only wrote this for my friend's contest, so please dont worry.
A contest entry
- april 13th inspiration celebration by And Hyetal.
420 points, ended May 14, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So touching and beautiful here, the love you have inside and how much you wanted to give it to her...
As always, this is special, because you wrote it


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awww thanks!
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interesting...
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tankies!
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This an incredible poem, and fare to relateable. Keep up the good work.


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thanks!
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I like your take on the prompt here. This was an interesting write; thank you for entering.

~Cassie
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Thanks, Cass-Cass!!!
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